November 6, 2011

Response: “Mr. Lytle” and Writing the Profile

Andrew Lytle

“To the end of her long life this woman wore a velvet ribbon at her neck, fastened with a golden pin. That’s how close Lytle was to the Civil War. Close enough to reach up as a child, passing into sleep, and fondle the clasp of that pin.”

That was my favorite passage from John Jeremiah Sullivan’s “Mister Lytle: An Essay.” It evokes a vivid image of literally reaching across time, a salient subject in a tale of an older artist and his protégé. Throughout, Sullivan does an excellent job of establishing Lytle as a relic, with his “extinct” accent and “extraterrestrial” body. (Describing the artist’s writing as “brilliantly senile” was another particularly strong turn of phrase, I think.) Something about this essay really gripped me; the theme of mortality, perhaps, but also the bits of writing wisdom sprinkled throughout.
Here are a few of the lines that most intrigued me, and my accompanying thoughts:

- “He told me I was a writer but that I had no idea what I was doing. ‘This is where the older artist comes in.’” (and later) “I tried to apply his criticisms, but they were sophisticated to a degree my efforts couldn’t repay. He was trying to show me how to solve problems I hadn’t learned existed.”
For me, this reinforces the idea of writing as a craft—something that is studied and honed over a lifetime. At the same time, there is an interesting conflict between these two passages. Though Lytle offers himself up as the knowledgeable “older artist,” he consequently confuses Sullivan by totally going over his head with his suggestions.
So, what aspects of writing are truly teachable, and which ones must be individually “discovered” as one’s craft develops? Seeing as I’m not a TA, I haven’t really had to ponder this subject. Instinctively, I’d say that “hard” rules like grammar and spelling are teachable, while personal style and voice are something an individual develops over time. (And of course, one’s style or voice might involve breaking the rules of grammar and spelling. I’m inclined to think you should know the rules before you break them, though.)

- “What he could still do, in his weakness, I couldn’t do.”
This possibly just resonated with me because I have so many aging relatives, but I thought that this line had a beautiful, poignant ring to it. I felt the same way about this selection: “I used to walk by his wedding picture, which hung next to the cupboard—the high forehead, the square jaw, the jug ears—and think, as I passed it, ‘If you wanted to contend with him, you’d have to contend with that man.’ Otherwise it was cheating.”
These passages really highlighted the differences between these two men—one at the beginning of his life and career, the other at the end of his own.

- “He wrote about the Muse, how she tests us when we’re young.”
OK, so this line really fascinated me . . . Can anyone guess what Lytle might have meant by this? I’ve heard other writers talk about their muses, but I can’t say that I have some particular figure in mind that inspires me to write. How are young artists “tested”?

-  “His toenails were of horn.” (and) “He knew how to adjust his formality by tenths of a degree, to let you know where you stood.”
Just awesome. Sullivan has a knack for choosing pitch-perfect descriptions.
The biggest disappointment for me in this piece was that, at the end, I felt that knowing so little of the Agrarian movement really cheated me out of Lytle’s intricacies. It was like having a certain pigment absent from a portrait; I got a rich-enough sense of who Lytle was, but there was still something important missing. Maybe that’s just a Critical Reader Failure on my part, as I wouldn’t say that it was Sullivan’s job to explain the Agrarian movement to me—particularly when you consider the venue for this piece. It's a subject that I'll definitely have to read up on in the future.
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As a side note . . . Looking at this trio of profiles, I found that they also offered a glimpse into the interviewer’s writing life. The questions the writers ask and the subjects they focus upon often offer insight into their own processes, even as they are profiling others.
Schenkar is preoccupied with voice, for example, while Roiphe discusses her habit of not writing down location details when she’s interviewing.
Hope that makes sense. I was just intrigued by the way that the interviewers' characters colored these profiles.

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